After a class feedback session I have learned how to improve this version of my cover to make it more appealing, I have also learned what is good about this cover and should not be changed,
I have had good feedback about the colouring of my magazine but I have been frequently told to try and tie the green that the artist is wearing, in with the sell lines to assure the colour scheme blends together properly.
I have also had some people say the sell line font is quite difficult to read however the other postitive feedback I have had about the modernism and edge of the font is stronger.
Another improvement to be made is the size of the main sell line which I have been advised will be more eye catching in a bigger font but a font which still fits within the artist.
Finally there is a lot of dead space at the bottom which needs filling to balance out the magazines layout.
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